Romance One Excerpt: Does this opening make me look interesting?

Yes? No? All comments appreciated - thanks! “This is the most beautiful campground we have ever seen. It’s a lovely spot.” The young woman gave Marianna a hug, and stepped into her car, shepherded by her husband. He closed the passenger door, then turned to Marianna. “Fabulous spot for our honeymoon. We thank you.” He …

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